Thursday, July 5, 2012

Critiquing my Colleague Daniel for the second time

 

I am so confused

I am really sick of seeing missing parts that ruin good photo shots and I am really going for patent the no ten percent method. I like the humor in the the quote, “I am so confused”, and that sign remind me of the commercial signs where they put the warning context in very small letters. Using the closed frame method in capturing many details like that was a genius move. I am sure that Daniel used zoom in this one because he capture the facial of this guy face without disturbing him while he is thinking. Finally as a person who like white and black, I think Daniel did a good dession when went with black and white with this shots and not color .

Spongebob Square Pants

In my opinion Daniel is really a good photographer who can take really good shot but the only thing that stopping him from getting perfection is the mission parts in most of his shots. I like the artificial art in this shot of the famous cartoon (Spongebob Square Pants) and if Daniel used the role of third the separate the fluers this shot will reach it max of being epic. The missing part of the wall really made this shot look very small and narrow; if more of the wall was taken in this shot their will be a good use of the method of frame in a frame. Again I can not said this enough I like the shot but the arrangement of it was really horrible mr.crab is suppose to be in top, both of the yellow spong bobs should be in level, and finally the green spong bob with Patrick should be in the bottom. I think if Daniel stretched this photo Horizontally instead of making it so narrow.

Thank God I am Alive

Really thank God that he still alive, Daniel did really a good job with using the alternate point of view to show how dangerous that accident was. I like the arrangement of those cars to gather in one line so it will show how Daniel's car was recked and a slow thinking person to compare it with the other cars; plus it create a bridge of cars which is cool. Using the close frame method to capture four cars, parking permit with air fresher, and all that shuddered glasses was really good job from Daniel. This shot used asymmetrical balance method of different portions of part in this shot. By adding the converging line method to the diagonal lines it will create an illusion that the cars has more space in parking spots but in matter a fact the outpost used the greedy method of compacting parking spots to collect more money form the poor students.