Critiquing my Colleague Daniel for the second time

 

I am so confused

I am really sick of seeing missing parts that ruin good photo shots and I am really going for patent the no ten percent method. I like the humor in the the quote, “I am so confused”, and that sign remind me of the commercial signs where they put the warning context in very small letters. Using the closed frame method in capturing many details like that was a genius move. I am sure that Daniel used zoom in this one because he capture the facial of this guy face without disturbing him while he is thinking. Finally as a person who like white and black, I think Daniel did a good dession when went with black and white with this shots and not color .

Spongebob Square Pants

In my opinion Daniel is really a good photographer who can take really good shot but the only thing that stopping him from getting perfection is the mission parts in most of his shots. I like the artificial art in this shot of the famous cartoon (Spongebob Square Pants) and if Daniel used the role of third the separate the fluers this shot will reach it max of being epic. The missing part of the wall really made this shot look very small and narrow; if more of the wall was taken in this shot their will be a good use of the method of frame in a frame. Again I can not said this enough I like the shot but the arrangement of it was really horrible mr.crab is suppose to be in top, both of the yellow spong bobs should be in level, and finally the green spong bob with Patrick should be in the bottom. I think if Daniel stretched this photo Horizontally instead of making it so narrow.

Thank God I am Alive

Really thank God that he still alive, Daniel did really a good job with using the alternate point of view to show how dangerous that accident was. I like the arrangement of those cars to gather in one line so it will show how Daniel's car was recked and a slow thinking person to compare it with the other cars; plus it create a bridge of cars which is cool. Using the close frame method to capture four cars, parking permit with air fresher, and all that shuddered glasses was really good job from Daniel. This shot used asymmetrical balance method of different portions of part in this shot. By adding the converging line method to the diagonal lines it will create an illusion that the cars has more space in parking spots but in matter a fact the outpost used the greedy method of compacting parking spots to collect more money form the poor students.

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Critiquing my Colleague

Daniel's Blurry Shot

Most of the new photographies rockies those days tend to miss small body parts which really make the photo lose it special touch. The combination of lowering the shader with oping the aperture will catch any fast moving object and this is what my colleague Daniel did by catching the deadly moving ping-pong ball which it seems like more than one ball moving together in a curved line. Using the close frame method help the perfect moment of those two couple/friends having fun in an excitement game. Role of third played a big part when those shot was taken, the male was in the left corner showing so intense focusing, the female on the right corner in less excitement motion, and finally the net is centered in the middle. By adding the converging line method without zooming the ping-pong table seem to be very close to the camera but infect Daniel told me that he was at least ten feet away from it when he did take this shot.

Daniel's Stop Motion Shot

This photo might confuse most of the people who saw it by thinking this was a status and not a real crocodile . The closed frame method was used brilliantly to focus on one the scariest looking reptiles more scarier and between the two shots it seem like it was going to attack the photographer. By adding the zigzag plants in front of the crocodile which is kind of hiding behind it and mixing it with the asymmetrical balance method to make this photo reach it epic. The alternate point of view played a huge role in this shot which made the crocodile look like it was really close to Daniel but in fact there was a prefect glass on the way and the crocodile itself was very far away. The perfect mixture of the converging line method with the diagonal lines, both create an illusion that made the crocodile look bigger but it reality that was a baby crocodile which can not even to be released in the wild.

Daniel's whatever Shot

This photo has the combination of both stop motion and blurry motion which make it a perfect shot for this project. Closed frame method to focus on the fast moving car in the middle of San Antonio downtown and capturing the lights around it. The symmetrical balance method make this photo reach it max of being blurry with a moving object in it. This photo had some objects that was not complete like the tree in the upper one and also the cool looking building. The trees in the lower photo give a good looking zigzag line that brought a beauty looking shot to the building too.

Stop Motion, Blur, and Sequence

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It is Behind Me

         This photo bring laughter to me even when I am at the saddest point of my life. Brilliantly using the closed frame method to focus on the always scared looking dog and making the black cat more blurry to add an evil shade on it. Mixing both of the role of third and the asymmetrical balance methods to make this photo reach it epic maximum where the dog is located on the closer, brighter, right corner of the shot, on the other hand, the cat is located on the further, darker, left side corner of the shot. Both of the alternate point of view and the stop motion techniques made the cat look like it was going to hunt down this dog (which let face it this dog looks like a rat) but in reality they might be best buddies. By adding the converging line method to the diagonal lines it will create an illusion that the cat is very far away from the dog but when focusing on the ceramic tile, we can see that the cat can get this prey in one leap.

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